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Tuesday, June 7, 2011

Postcard!!

Dear, Mum

How are you? I hope everything is well over there.
I am having cool!
Today, I have been to the Atlantic Language School for meet my family. Later, I´m going to Aran Island. Then we going to Galway. Tomorrow we going to tour of Galway! After we going to Shopping Centre, finally I went to my house!!
I love You
Antonio

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  1. Here are some suggestions to improve your writing. I got your message accross, but you can improve your grammar:

    Dear, Mum

    How are you? I hope everything is well over there.
    I am having a cool TIME!
    Today, I have been to the Atlantic Language School TO meet my family. Later, I´m going to Aran Island. LATER, we ARE going to Galway. Tomorrow, we ARE going to HAVE A WALING tour AROUND Galway! After, we ARE going to THE Shopping Centre, AND finally I WILL RETURN to my house!!
    I love You
    Antonio

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